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IMDB rating: 7.20 Plot: The UK is about to switch its currency from Pounds to Euros, giving a gang a chance to rob the poorly-secured train loaded with money on its way to incineration. But, during the robbery, one of the big bags falls literally from the sky on Damian’s playhouse, a 5-year old given to talking to saints. The boy then starts seeing what the world and the people around him are made of. Ethics, being human and the soul all come to the forefront in this film. |
Actors: Etel Alexander Nathan,McGibbon Lewis Owen,Phillips Leslie,Nesbitt James,Fulford Christopher,Quigley Pearce,Armstrong Alun,Cilenti Enzo,Memarzia Nasser,Kirkham Harry,Macarthy Cornelius,Agboke Kolade,Crime,Family,Drama,Comedy,
what do you think of my plot premise?
Living on Earth there is an underground society, banished from their dimension millions of years ago. The reason for their banishment was a war between two rival factions and in an attempt to save civilisation they were exiled to Earth to sort out their problems. Now, some live among us, trying to forget their roots, while others continue the fight that got them exiled in the first place. Both sides are now searching for humans with special ‘gifts’ to help them in their battle against the nemesis.
That is where a 16 year old boy, David Hlossen, comes in…
I think it sound really good!!!!!!! But, sounds somehow familiar……I dont know why
xStellagirlx | Jan 15, 2010
I like the complexity with the war between rival factions and being sent to Earth to sort things out. It sounds interesting, and I’d probably flip through and read it if it was the blurb of a book.
Plenty of these things have been seen before. People from another dimension? Check. Secret society? Check. Exiled secret society? Check. People with powers or "gifts"? Check.
This doesn’t mean these things are bad. They’ve been done lots of times before because they work. Written well, they become tropes, not cliches, so run with formula, but feel free to tweak it to make it your own.
The whole ’special chosen kid with gift thing’ is a staple fantasy/sci-fi plot that has been done lots of times. I’ve read loads of books with this premise, and IMHO, it’s tiring, but that’s just me being a jaded reader.
Nothing | Jan 15, 2010
Cool idea, but the special talent kid is kind of boring unless its some really extraordinary gift that hasn’t been used before like suppose he has sonic sound waves and can sing people to sleep. Can be really interesting if presented well. By the way if you really do write the story please send it to me to read. I won’t copy or anything because I’m a writer too.
princesscaspian | Jan 15, 2010









